See, this is life!!!
The eternal stars, shining in the glorious heaven,
The limitless land, beyond the infinite horizon,
Is it beauty that brings brightness to the night fallen?
I, a little girl, stands amidst all, in this legion.
Is it tomorrow that I am looking forward to?
Are fear and remorse keeping my heart in chains?
The wind, colourless, the earth brown, the sky blue,
Now, tell me, is life’s journey joys or pains?
The sky is mysterious and yet beautiful,
Perhaps, this life that holds so many questions is so,
Sometimes, it has too much mystery and rule
But, life’s beautiful and beauty is life’s law…
-Rajyashori
Hi, my name is Mir and I live in hong kong. That is a really great poem. did you make that poem by yourself?
this is the link to my class blog
https://kidblog.org/class/blogging-club-2018/posts
Hi Mir
It feels great to learn that you have liked my poem. Yes, I wrote this poem myself. Actually, I love writing very much and it is nice that keeping a blog has given me great chances to do so. How about you? What do you like to do?
You’re from Hong Kong. I have an aunt who was a nurse and used to live there. I heard it’s really nice. Can you tell me more about Hong Kong?
Best regards,
Rajyashori
Rajyashori,
What a beautiful poem enhanced with the picture. Yes, life is beautiful, engaging and sometimes scary.
In Indian, Rajshri / Rajashree is a female name meaning Princess with brain, Beauty and Brown in balance.
I am not sure if it iis your setting or my computer acting up and making first letter of each word capital.
Happy Writing.
Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team Student Blogging Challenge 2018, USA)
http://trivediziemba.edublogs.org/
Mrs Trivedi,
Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I am really glad to learn that you enjoyed this poem.
Yes, my name means Princess. I may not be a king’s daughter but we are all children of our land.
I hope to write better in the future. I would really appreciate any advice or feedback you could give for improvement.
Thankyou
Rajyashori
Rajyashori,
How do I Know your name means Princess?
Simple. I am born and raised in India. I am Gujarati, My Bhabhi (brother’s wife) is named Rajashri. My daughter’s name is AmilyShree
Rajashri = princess
Shree / Shree = balance of Laxmi (Goddess of Wealth), Sarswati (Goddess of knowledge) and Kali (Goddess of Strenth/justice)
May you always be blessed.
Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba
Mrs. Trivedi-Ziembi,
Thanks for replying to my comment. It is great to hear from you again.
I would look forward to any advice you would like to give to improve my blogging.
Sincerely yours,
Rajyashori
Hi Rajyashori,
This is a wonderful poem. I didn’t such a small poem can lead to bigger adventures. I also totally agree that this is life. You might be a writer when you grow up because this poem has a lot of meaning to it. Please come check my blog.
http://hmstani.edublogs.org
Sincerely,
Tani
Thanks Tani for your wonderful comment. ‘Being a writer’, I’d love to be one but I still have a lot to learn. I believe that poems can be interpreted independently and I’d love to learn what you think about the meaning of this poem.
I’ll visit your blog as well.
Rajyashori
Dear Rajyashori,
the picture is really really pretty. The poem is really good. Do you enjoy learning about space? Come and check out my blog @ http://hmsjena.edublogs.org.
Aloha,
Jena
Hi Jena
Thanks for the comment. I am very much excited about space and I love astronomy the most. I enjoy sky gazing and reading myths related to the heavenly bodies. I believe that you are also excited about space. I’ll visit your blog as well.
Rajyashori
Dear Rajyashori,
What is sky gazing? I enjoy looking up at the night sky and seeing all of the stars. I am excited to learn about different types of stars and what might be beyond the planets. Do you enjoy learning about science? Come and check out my blog @ http://hmsjena.edublogs.org.
Aloha,
Jena
Dear Jena
Yes, I enjoy learning about science except perhaps memorising formulas and doing calculations. But I sincerely enjoy science classes.
Sky gazing is an act of leisure where you look up the sky and try to know about the things up there. It can be considered as amateur astronomy.
Rajyashori